Soooo you basically want the old paragraph with the word "must" crossed out and replaced with "may." Which we still don't have the authority to write down because there is no Templar order.

Please remember someone else is doing all this writing and that idea didn't originate with Dorian--not even the part where it's not mandatory. Dorian's proposal is no different from her own, it's just not mandatory and she's not sure why you're arguing to replace hers with his.

Her hand is cramping up and there is ink everywhere.